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Citrus Comic Extortion by Collon28 Citrus Comic Extortion by Collon28
The big question I have here, as we more or less conclude the story arc involving Bob, is "WHAT?" What did he do, what does he know, what does he have, that he wouldn't want the world to know about it? And perhaps more importantly, how does Razz know about it? Perhaps someday we'll find out the truth.
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tommerch Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Bob *should* hate his life. Razz having a hold over him - that's hell on earth. Though I wonder if the secret holds more meaning to Bob than it would to most other people.

Thos. Merchant
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Collon28 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Whatever the secret is, it's precious to him, and will not harm the world in any real way. It may make the world more embarrassed, but nothing beyond that. I'm sure if it was something like possessing launch codes to a nuclear bomb, even Razz would tattle on him (but not without amusing himself first, mind you).

I "like" that Bob can't move away, either; that would spoil the secret somehow. He can't kill himself, because I picture him to be somewhat religious. Razz knows, as we'll see in the next episode, just how far he can push the man.

Thanks for the fav as well, as always. :)
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KiusLady Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, the facial expressions are great; the joke is funny and the lines are indeed looking better! (Though what's with the lack of chair line-age in frame 2?)

I wouldn't worry too much about this one being the "magnum opus" or anything like that. There's more funnies to be had in this world!!
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Collon28 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I could claim I was getting artsy with the middle panel, but due to inconsistency with that, I'm just going to have to be honest: I was lazy. Admittedly though (as stated on the comic site), I felt that I wanted to focus on the dialogue and less on the visuals; so with them being bland to begin with, I didn't see the need to freshen up anymore than it already was.

Yeah, I've already thought of more stuff that'll be great. Granted, some of it features more interactions between Razz and Bob, but I'm certain the humor will flow. Thanks for the encouragement.
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SamBruner Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010
Nice. It's called having hand, I like it.

And what is with the price of cereal?
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Collon28 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's the corn and wheat prices going up, causing a snowball/domino effect.

Thank you for the comment, and glad you liked.
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Gray-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:rofl: I love it! Excellent joke. And the faces in the fourth panel are perfect.
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Collon28 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I smile when I replay the joke in my mind when I'm away from the keyboard/monitor. It's just so excellent, not tooting my horn or anything.

Now I have a problem; this story arc could be my crescendo when my comic has just begun. I trust I'll be able to recapture the comedy gold here.

Thank you kindly for the fav, by the way. :)
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BeowulfDoomhammer Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
It's little wonder to me now why Bob hates him!
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Collon28 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Shyeah! Imagine being around American Retirement age and some punk kid about half your age holds leverage over you. I'd probably be pretty annoyed as well.
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